I'd hear you out if I knew how, but the black-and-white spiral won't say how. I didn't catch the stagehand's team setting scenes, making a few. The crisis narrative unfolds - I'm locked on dramas shown anew. I'd sing to you if I knew how, but the black-and-white spiral won't say how. Instead it writhes in bitter fury; snaking round a rotten apple. It hisses hymns of a forsaken place; hymns towards a hellish chapel. I'd hold you close if I knew how, but the black-and-white spiral won't say how. It churns the earth beneath my feet and hooks its tendrils in my boots. Dragged away by crooked teeth, I go where trees will not grow roots. I'd love you back if I knew how, but the black-and-white spiral won't say how. My stomach turns with revolutions, tangled in a fork and sliced apart. I munch on my own mushed-up mind and wait for the next programme to start.
The Revolution Was Already Televised - A Poem by Tom Shaw
Music - Irama Gema - The Construal of Space in Language and Thought
An earlier version of this piece very nearly made it into my book, “Born Anew and Other Poems”, before I decided to save it in the hopes it might win a few competitions. It did not, and while I could have re-submitted it to other competitions, it awarded me the opportunity to re-visit the poem and make some changes to it, allowing it to level-up into the format that you see here. It then made its way into my next poetry book, “From A Dying Empire Near You,” where it is very much at home.
The title is a play on Gil Scott-Heron’s spoken word classic, which is worthy of merit for many reasons. In writing my own poem, I had a lot of ideas in my head at the time around predictive programming, media scare-stories, colour revolutions and engineered crises that made their way into this poem. It takes a more surreal approach to how the media creates a “narrative” around the kind of things we should be expected to talk about and believe in. Fellow Substack poet and writer
recently did a very in-depth piece on this exact subject, which I’ve linked below for your reading pleasure.Gil Scott-Heron also does with his piece, albeit less abstractly and within the context of the American racial divides of the 1960s and 1970s. Whenever I think I think of this poem, I also think of another musical talent noted for his lyrics, albeit a very different one to Gil Scott-Heron: Morrissey, and one of his solo singles, which has an excellent chorus in keeping with the theme of this poem. I’ll leave it below for you all to enjoy.
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Thank you for taking the time to read this piece. I hope it sparked something in you.
With gratitude,
Tom
Thanks for your poem and creative renditions of it, Tom! In addition to propaganda, I am reminded of the "computer says no" phenomenon, where one of the sad side effects of our technologized world is when humans can't even get together to accomplish a goal (say, closing a bank account) because "computer says no." In some ways, we have become slaves to our software, and forget that it's supposed to serve humankind, not be the final dictator of what is and isn't possible. The phenomenon does make for good comedy, though: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x0YGZPycMEU
Gil Scot Heron, what a legend. Love this poem. Cryptic or clear, depends on what you choose to see. Very good!