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@The Rewind thank you for sharing🌹what a gem, very powerful poem indeed.

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You are very talented ✨

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Great phrases and lines that make me rethink how I'm writing in my own poems. So well executed and great handling of a tough subject matter.

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Thank you for referencing “Mistakes Were NOT Made,” Tom, as well as for sharing your succinct portrait of the crucible the sinner and victim find themselves caught in (I especially like “for he is stuck in a rhyme”) as they perpetuate the cycle of abuse together.

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